Its hard for me to write my thesis, because all the points that I want to talk about in my essay are different from each other. Somehow I’m going to have to connect them all at the end and if not then my essay is going to look sloppy. My passages do demonstrate my ideas, but I need to have more of my thoughts in, not just what they say. My introduction is alway missing something at lest thats what everyone happen to noticing. I’m just alway missing details which is weird because when I read it to myself it sounds so good I don’t know why but it does. Also when we are limited to words that makes me so worried about what to write. I don’t like it because I’m going to have to think about what I’m going to write, and how should I word it so it reaches the word limit. I do repeat similar sentences in my passage , but I word it differently. I’m actually not sure if I could do that, but it does go nce with the flow.
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UNE Class of 2023??
